Yesterday in Te Ngahere we were learning about our poems and how to use metaphors.

Our Walt was to use language features appropriately showing a developing understanding of effect.

We had to write about ourselves in descriptive words  we were not allowed to use similes.

I would add more descriptive words in my poem. This is my first draft.

Lennix is a tower standing well above in work

Lennix is a tornado sucking up all the info

Lennix is a bright star shining through the black galaxy

My Pepeha Blog Post

My Pepeha


In Te Ngahere we have been learning how to say write and share our  Visual Pepeha in front of our class. We have been adding new information. We had to say our Visual Pepeha confidently   and know it off by heart. I have enjoyed doing my blog post. I want to learn how to say it in 1 year without looking at my Pepeha.