Yesterday in Te Ngahere we were learning about our poems and how to use metaphors.
Our Walt was to use language features appropriately showing a developing understanding of effect.
We had to write about ourselves in descriptive words we were not allowed to use similes.
I would add more descriptive words in my poem. This is my first draft.
Lennix is a tornado sucking up all the info
Lennix is a bright star shining through the black galaxy
Hi Lennix Kingi.
ReplyDeleteI like your poem about metaphors it is very cool and it has lots of detail. It has a lot of description about yourself next time add some more ideas to it keep up the good work.